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Old 14-08-2009, 12:29 PM   #1 (permalink)
Crimson - WIP track...comments needed
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Hi all,

Please check out my latest work in progress...it's called Definition of a Dreamstate (working title). Very melodic uplifting trance track.

http://www.mp3unsigned.com/showmp3.asp?mp3id=60424

There is no mastering to this, so it is all raw!

Looking for this to be my big track, so any constructive comments are very welcome indeed! Can always count on you guys for great comments.

Ending is not complete and ends abruptly, and the breakdown needs some work but the general gist is there!

Many thanks,

Simon (Crimson)
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Old 17-08-2009, 13:34 PM
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Hi moonturnedblue...thanks for the comments on this one...I have torn down the track now and replaced with a full version taking into account peoples comments.

The full, altered version is here:

Definition of a Dreamstate

I have used some t-racks presets to beef it up but as said in the new MP3's section I intend to get a professional engineer on the case.

The current mix does give a good idea on how I want it sounding following professional mastering though.

Hopefully this will be as well recieved as the WIP was!!

Thanks again,

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Something wrong here, everytime i hit your link it sends me to the MP3 home page...hmmmmm
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Thanks for that, i am at work just now (and have no speakers)but will have a listen tonight or over the weekend

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Hi Ditheramb,

Yes sorry, I completed the track and uploaded it again which changed the url!! I have a link in the new MP3's forum now as I decided it was no longer a WIP.

Thanks very much for your interest mate...looking forward to the comments
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